You’ll get support, encouragement, guidance, and accountability every month as you work toward your revision goals.

Here’s how it works:

Step One: Outline Critique & Manuscript Review

I’ll provide detailed comments on your story’s synopsis addressing the following fiction elements:

• Plot/Structure

• Conflict

• Character arcs

• Transitions

• Genre conventions

• And more!

I’ll also review your manuscript to identify stylistic issues that will need to be addressed in revision and summarize my feedback in a brief editorial letter.

Step Two: Initial Coaching Call

We’ll spend up to 90 minutes discussing my feedback, prioritizing your revision to-do list, and coming up with a comprehensive, step-by-step plan for your entire revision process. We’ll set realistic deadlines and make sure you feel confident about your next steps.

I’ll adjust the call to meet your individual needs, but in general you can expect us to:

• Discuss each step you’ll take in the revision process

• Determine which fiction elements you’ll need to prioritize in revision

• Identify background tasks to support your revision process (e.g. character development, additional worldbuilding, etc.)

• Create a schedule for your revision process with realistic deadlines and benchmark goals for you to hit

• Develop a plan for you to get feedback at key points during the revision process

Step Three: Monthly Feedback & Coaching Calls

You’ll submit revised chapters (2 submissions up to 5,000 words each) for feedback. I’ll adjust my feedback to meet your individual needs, but you can expect a combination of developmental and line-level feedback.

In addition to written feedback on your submissions, we’ll meet monthly to discuss your writing, brainstorm new ideas, and navigate any obstacles that come up along the way. In addition to addressing the challenges of revising, we’ll also celebrate your progress so that you recognize your growth as a writer.

While each coaching plan is tailored to your needs, you can expect the following:

• Feedback that amplifies your novel’s strengths while illuminating opportunities for improvement.

• Craft lessons that help you grow as a writer.

• Real-talk discussions about what is and isn’t working for you and encouragement to find the writing process that best serves you.

• Partnership so that you never have to feel like you’re writing in isolation.

Ongoing coaching is perfect for you if…

…you’ve never finished a novel before and you need a partner to help you cross that finish line

…you thrive when you have ongoing feedback about what’s working and what needs work

…you’ve been overwhelmed by feedback before and you’d rather get feedback in small doses instead of a massive editorial letter that covers your entire book

…you love talking out ideas and would love to have someone to bounce ideas off of, specifically someone who knows your book (almost) as well as you do and is just as invested in your success

Sound like you?

Book a discovery call today!

Your investment = $1,600+

Includes initial revision planning and three month minimum commitment.

All prices shown are USD.

Book your discovery call here.